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Outline for a gryphon character image I am working on since quite a while, painting the background there in the moment, it's supposed to be a scene featuring the "Blutfeder" clan, old stuff I never was able to finish :blush:

She is supposed to be a snowleopard gryphon, wingless, she tried to hold him back, story behind is a fight between father and son... etc.

Posting this because I am looking for crits, concerning their poses, so whatever constructive is welcome ;)

Inking done in Photoshop this time.
FULLVIEW plz...

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:iconashiragirl:
Whoa~ I love it! I think it's been too long since I've seen gryphon art from you ;D

I don't have any critique here. You're way above my level. xD

Aaand...FIRST COMMENT WHOOo

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Ashiragirl #44127 on Wajas!
:iconthunderfox5:
Wow Liz! That's so freaking beautiful! I say no more! I just hope to see it coloured! I love this picture so much! Wow!

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...and if it moves... kill it.
:iconangelicdragonpuppy:
I think that's really good, I love the poses and detail! The only thing I'd suggest is that if the gryphon she's holding back is angry enough to get in a fight, then his beak should be further open, bared in a more angry shriek or something like that, he looks a little miffed but not enraged enough for combat ;p

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Eirika x Lyon 4 Eva!!
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:omg: OH MY GOD!!! Do NOT click on this LINK!! :noes: [link] :ohnoes:
:iconhourglass-sentinel:
Ohh, it's great! I find nothing wrong with the pose. At least, nothing that I can see! I hope to see this colored~!

I like the emotion in it. However, I do kind of agree with ~AngelicDragonPuppy in her comment that perhaps his mouth should be a little more open and angry.

But regardless, it's wonderful!

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Chase the heathen call; we belong, you and I.
:icondragonetgirl:
its a realy beautiful piece. there is a lot of feelings in it.

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come to the dark side... we have cookies
:iconskythe-soulblade:
you most certainly got the expressions right, one of anger, one of fear.

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In the modern world, people can't spell worth a damn, for example, they say Skythe instead of SCYTHE.

Scythe is a weapon and a tool for Harvesting

Skythe is the guy who has this little rant on this comment.....thing...
:icondragonkeeper7:
That's so cool. It reminds me of my 2 parakeets.

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Dragons will rule the earth again some day! And they will take back this world that was once their own...
:icontirevy:
Beautifully done. I really like the poses.
:iconniiyama:
the detail in this is spectacular o_o

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